Good work Anh. Some of the shoulder moves are a bit large (apacing) and could be slightly off set to get more texture to the acting. They should be felt but not draw too much focus from the face.
Some tests with slight head twists or tilts may help to add some tension to the story.
The eye and eyebrow animation needs to be done on a further pass. Some meaningful blinks and eyebrow shapes are required.
This will turn out to be a fine EAPS with just a bit more work
Cool Anh! Nice work.
ReplyDeleteGood work Anh. Some of the shoulder moves are a bit large (apacing) and could be slightly off set to get more texture to the acting. They should be felt but not draw too much focus from the face.
ReplyDeleteSome tests with slight head twists or tilts may help to add some tension to the story.
The eye and eyebrow animation needs to be done on a further pass. Some meaningful blinks and eyebrow shapes are required.
This will turn out to be a fine EAPS with just a bit more work
spacing - in reference to the shoulders (typo in prev comment due to typing with a cat blocking the keyboard)
ReplyDeleteYour'e funny! I like this sort of understated dry humour. The fan is great and a funny element.
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