Make some drawings a bit more clearer. Make sure it's not confusing. Shorter, more compact and specific. The helmet in the house might be a little confusing. Define the character motives a bit better.
You were great today. It was a pity we were limited for time. It would have been good to see the whole thing! I'm glad you have stuck with the narrative for now, you have great ideas and always from a different point of view.
It was great to see you get up and make a pitch today. Your work usually speaks for itself, so it was great to see you speak for your work.
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You were great today. It was a pity we were limited for time. It would have been good to see the whole thing! I'm glad you have stuck with the narrative for now, you have great ideas and always from a different point of view.
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